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Urvasi Devi Dasi's avatar

Reading this felt a bit like listening to someone think out loud in the middle of a long night. When the world seems noisy and confrontational, yet inside you’re just trying to hold on to your own small patch of sky.

That line about simply wanting to “do you” really landed with me. So many of us are quietly walking around with that same wish: to move through life without constantly bracing against someone else’s expectations or projections. But I love where you gently turn it: that perhaps being alive means feeling all of it. The strange mix of joy, resistance, beauty, and misunderstanding. In a way, witnessing it all is part of the human assignment.

And the invitation to just smile, laugh for no reason… there’s something quietly rebellious in that. A reminder that the heart can still choose lightness even when the world tries to pull it elsewhere. Sometimes that small inner freedom, that space where your “stars” still belong to you, is where life feels most real.

The Successpreneur's avatar

Love this! Poetry is slowly becoming a lost art in the age of video consumption. (I hope I’m wrong). Thanks for inspiring me to go back to poetry -- reading and maybe writing some for pleasure and creative release. ❤️

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